Looking good. Can you use the crash beam with that FMIC? I just ordered the XS-Power/SSAC FMIC, it's a bit larger than the punishment, and longer too, so it'll fill the Talon front a little better. As you mentioned the Eclipse has a taller opening, I'm going to do a bit of custom work to open mine up some more, it's gonna have a huge mouth. Still dunno what I'll do about crash beam though, hopefully I can modify it to work, I want something there.
I like the wire tuck around the intake manifold aswell, I just started doing the same thing to mine before I had to leave. I got a non-cruise throttle cable that I plan to re-route under the manifold so it's out of the way too.
Good luck on the rest of it.